LostXOR@fedia.io to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 2 days agoAnon finds a hutfedia.ioexternal-linkmessage-square57fedilinkarrow-up1610
arrow-up1610external-linkAnon finds a hutfedia.ioLostXOR@fedia.io to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 2 days agomessage-square57fedilink
minus-squareDiddlydee@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up48·2 days agoI can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
minus-squaremortemtyrannis@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up4·1 day agoAlso the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.
minus-squareLostXOR@fedia.ioOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up15·2 days agoMaybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?
I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.
Maybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?