MrSebSin@sh.itjust.works to Comic Strips@lemmy.world · 26 days agoBello Bear 21 Mar 2025 “88 MPH” [OC] - Please subscribe !bellobearofficial@lemmy.world for new comics Mon, Wed and Friday!sh.itjust.worksexternal-linkmessage-square4fedilinkarrow-up14cross-posted to: webcomics@lemmy.mlbellobearofficial@lemmy.world
arrow-up14external-linkBello Bear 21 Mar 2025 “88 MPH” [OC] - Please subscribe !bellobearofficial@lemmy.world for new comics Mon, Wed and Friday!sh.itjust.worksMrSebSin@sh.itjust.works to Comic Strips@lemmy.world · 26 days agomessage-square4fedilinkcross-posted to: webcomics@lemmy.mlbellobearofficial@lemmy.world
minus-squareGoldenDeLorean@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·26 days agoThe polar bear is saying it can’t be stock in the first panel, then the plant is implying the same thing in the third panel, if I’m understanding the way it’s written correctly.
minus-squareMrSebSin@sh.itjust.worksOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·25 days agoThanks for the feedback! Rereading it now, I messed up the conversation a bit there. Still honing my craft.
minus-squareKazuyaDarklight@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·edit-226 days agoYeah, the way in which the points being made are distributed among the cast seems a little off.
minus-squareMrSebSin@sh.itjust.worksOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·25 days agoAgreed and thanks for the feedback.
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The polar bear is saying it can’t be stock in the first panel, then the plant is implying the same thing in the third panel, if I’m understanding the way it’s written correctly.
Thanks for the feedback! Rereading it now, I messed up the conversation a bit there. Still honing my craft.
Yeah, the way in which the points being made are distributed among the cast seems a little off.
Agreed and thanks for the feedback.